I. Loved. This.
You know me, I'm not a huge fangirl over Prussia - but I thought that this lemon, along with the part preceding it, was great! It was really well written (*wipes away nosebleed for third time*) and it never really had me bored! Which is saying something, considering if I'm not that into a character, reading a story about them will be like going to math class. I'd fall asleep!
But yes, Sara, you did an AWESOME - yes, using Prussia's word - job on this! With each writing piece, I can tell you're getting better and better!
Keep up the awesomeness that is your creativity and artwork!